tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post74707421285177718..comments2023-06-24T02:07:41.519-07:00Comments on Deep Winter: Distance, Chapter 35Tom Sherryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10491833021791731995noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-39489580077152914112012-03-07T23:15:23.517-08:002012-03-07T23:15:23.517-08:00Mr. Sherry,
Keep up the good work. I just re-rea...Mr. Sherry,<br /><br />Keep up the good work. I just re-read Deep Winter a short while ago. That book was good, and your writing really has been improving since then.<br /><br />(This is not an affirmation of Anonymous Feb 25. I don't know what that was about. I mean over time, as a fan, I've seen your writing get tighter and generally improve.)<br /><br />Some free editorial advice: <br /><br />"It’s counter to our purposes [to] go attack an agency"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-13178847669772722422012-03-07T20:34:35.292-08:002012-03-07T20:34:35.292-08:00Hi Tom-
Thanks so much for sharing your gifts with...Hi Tom-<br />Thanks so much for sharing your gifts with all of us. I enjoy reading your work immensely.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-27647246255413633642012-03-07T06:34:40.042-08:002012-03-07T06:34:40.042-08:00Great, Great Chapter!! MORE, MORE..... When is Do...Great, Great Chapter!! MORE, MORE..... When is Doug going back to the Farm?<br />FranAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-66003615854812202382012-03-01T19:55:50.450-08:002012-03-01T19:55:50.450-08:00I agree. Thank you for yet another great chapter....I agree. Thank you for yet another great chapter. This story is great and I can't wait to hear what happens.<br />AnneAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-53116094716877090792012-03-01T13:43:19.790-08:002012-03-01T13:43:19.790-08:00Thank you for another great chapter. I look forwar...Thank you for another great chapter. I look forward to them and check your site everyday for another chapter. I know you are really busy but would love to see more chapters. Great story.<br />FranAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-75173867836162853942012-03-01T12:42:23.301-08:002012-03-01T12:42:23.301-08:00Cool! Enter SLOCUM stage right (cue ominous music...Cool! Enter SLOCUM stage right (cue ominous music: DUM! DUM! DUM!)! Wow, the plot is starting to thicken. Really looking forward to what happens to Doug and friends around April 15 on their timeline. It was REALLY interesting for the Drummonds, and Doug is a mite closer!Backwoods Engineerhttp://www.freerepublic.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-55694608143176507472012-02-29T18:56:58.594-08:002012-02-29T18:56:58.594-08:00Thanks for the new chapter tom. Hope all is going...Thanks for the new chapter tom. Hope all is going well with the family & you now. I have to wonder how Doug is ever going to get away from "The Company" after his contract is up. And with the promotion, is it even no longer an issue? I would imagine he is being salaried and as an exec...he wouldn't necessarily have one? So many questions keep popping up in my head on this part of the story. It just keeps getting better and better. Thank you so much!SheWoffhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07982900110079801291noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-5080950649829552892012-02-27T08:17:49.667-08:002012-02-27T08:17:49.667-08:00Reading well, Mr. Sherry! I suggest a couple of ed...Reading well, Mr. Sherry! I suggest a couple of edits, at "under fire from behind and to the tree line on the right" and "It’s counter to our purposes go attack". On continuity, isn't Doug's truck armored at the engine compartment?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-12915469242707575252012-02-25T04:31:38.324-08:002012-02-25T04:31:38.324-08:00Did someone else write this, the style of wrioting...Did someone else write this, the style of wrioting in this chapter seems very different?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-86949420639973955132012-02-24T12:10:54.010-08:002012-02-24T12:10:54.010-08:00I've been bad, and not thanked you for this (n...I've been bad, and not thanked you for this (not to mention your other stories).<br /><br />So, Thanks Tom!Peterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13357534583257044398noreply@blogger.com