tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post1356175501507823851..comments2023-06-24T02:07:41.519-07:00Comments on Deep Winter: Distance, Chapter 44Tom Sherryhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10491833021791731995noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-73285116716366060942012-09-29T18:37:55.141-07:002012-09-29T18:37:55.141-07:00To "Anonymous Sept. 11, 2012 12:14 AM" -...To "Anonymous Sept. 11, 2012 12:14 AM" -<br /><br />How about you let Tom write his book the way he sees fit. If you don't like how he wrote this chapter, or if you are unable to understand how it fits the storyline, you are certainly free to post your own attempt at writing a book in an online blog. <br /><br />Thank you Tom. Keep them coming as you are able. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-15990468119970561072012-09-23T20:43:29.003-07:002012-09-23T20:43:29.003-07:00Thanks for chapter. I do agree it didn't work...Thanks for chapter. I do agree it didn't work as well as past chapters. I had to go back and make sure I didn't miss a chapter. <br /> The other chapters were so dang good, I could see the situation, how he was working it.. <br /> Please continue with next chapter.Larrynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-23660154316847946862012-09-17T20:21:44.541-07:002012-09-17T20:21:44.541-07:00I agree, thanks for the chapter!! We all appreciat...I agree, thanks for the chapter!! We all appreciate it. I know you have been very busy. This story is great and I can't wait to hear how it all works out.<br /><br />Anne from SeattleAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-7801582355373078992012-09-15T17:00:40.007-07:002012-09-15T17:00:40.007-07:00Thank you for this chapter. It helps flesh out so...Thank you for this chapter. It helps flesh out some of the things that were going on in your first book.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-78572094451789579572012-09-15T16:59:49.340-07:002012-09-15T16:59:49.340-07:00Aside from being interesting information that help...Aside from being interesting information that helps fill in blanks from other novels, I suspect this is a transitional chapter. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-74376939444505020322012-09-13T07:46:57.164-07:002012-09-13T07:46:57.164-07:00Tom, thanks for the new chapter!
Waiting can be s...Tom, thanks for the new chapter!<br /><br />Waiting can be so painful!<br /><br />Heh.<br /><br />Bob<br />IIIidahobobhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12857771751176894988noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-49150811298416274372012-09-12T12:37:59.984-07:002012-09-12T12:37:59.984-07:00Ah... so this is where Arnold Slocum gets is start...Ah... so this is where Arnold Slocum gets is start... will you do a side story on how he goes from Regent exec to SA General?<br /><br />Thanks for another chapter!<br /><br />Lake LiliAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-80566054173046637602012-09-12T12:11:46.117-07:002012-09-12T12:11:46.117-07:00Tom,
Thanks for the next chapter. I recognized the...Tom,<br />Thanks for the next chapter. I recognized the names Blackburn and Slocum right away, but I had to look them up in Remnant to remember who they were. I understand it is difficult for Doug to be a 'mole' inside Regent. Looking forward to what happens next.<br />God bless,<br />DaveDavehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04720906656175358029noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-3205723835340379512012-09-11T19:19:32.188-07:002012-09-11T19:19:32.188-07:00Thanks for the chapter! I know your life is busy,...Thanks for the chapter! I know your life is busy, but oh how I wish the next chapter would come quickly!Janehttp://www.wagsranch.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-87079128786417909272012-09-11T00:36:07.351-07:002012-09-11T00:36:07.351-07:00I've not read it yet.
Airport Limo Long Island...I've not read it yet.<br /><a href="http://www.roslynlimo.com/Long-Island-limo.htmll" rel="nofollow">Airport Limo Long Island</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14277777476611189927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5666838233874477863.post-29358434098706989062012-09-11T00:14:04.993-07:002012-09-11T00:14:04.993-07:00I don't like this chapter, Tom. First time I&...I don't like this chapter, Tom. First time I've ever really disliked a chapter of yours this much.<br /><br />This is basically all exposition. You give us multi-paragraph news updates, but when it comes to hearing about how this affects the characters we get that "Doug as to remain in character." Stop with the stage directions. Where is the story?<br /><br />And a minor nitpick: You don't get shot in Chicago for being black. You get shot in Chicago for being black and being in the wrong neighborhood with the wrong tattoo. Chicago is not a place where race-based shooting of black people is at all prevalent. You're writing fiction, but that's no reason to write lies.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com